tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9757991.post6124662736925672223..comments2023-03-26T04:40:44.435-03:00Comments on Buick City Complex: a new life - part 12Perfect Virgohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17842802482293784692noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9757991.post-50585063275381783382008-04-07T09:43:00.000-03:002008-04-07T09:43:00.000-03:00A remarkable twist. Would make a great plot for a ...A remarkable twist. Would make a great plot for a TV drama.<BR/><BR/>Looking forward to the next installment.Russell CJ Duffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00519621428036481426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9757991.post-21098641721966183352008-03-08T10:38:00.000-04:002008-03-08T10:38:00.000-04:00Boulies - glad it is all beginning to make sense! ...Boulies - glad it is all beginning to make sense! I may ring the changes with a return to single posts for a while but I do have other ideas in the pipeline...<BR/><BR/>Neetee - yes, we all leave a trail, no matter how slight. I am delighted you are spotting all the little nuances I have tried to convey. I never thought of myself as habit-forming before but I like the idea!Perfect Virgohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17842802482293784692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9757991.post-38966686694818393762008-03-08T01:51:00.000-04:002008-03-08T01:51:00.000-04:00I love that you've demonstrated how nothing ever g...I <B>love</B> that you've demonstrated how nothing ever goes unseen. <BR/><BR/>And in such a fluid way, you draw a great picture of greed and the effect it has upon the dark mind of Francis.<BR/><BR/>Your writing is a habitual read. <BR/><BR/>I'll be here waiting for more.Neeteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10022172941959946854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9757991.post-10222542882585796192008-03-06T03:22:00.000-04:002008-03-06T03:22:00.000-04:00I think you've done a fine job bringing it all tog...I think you've done a fine job bringing it all together. I think that flashbacks can be difficult even in film. Sometimes past and present can blur a little, but the reader (or viewer if it's film) just has to have a little patience and if the story's good, it all becomes clarified quickly. That's how I felt your story works here. So no worries PV. It's a great story and I'm riveted by it. Hope you write another story in series after you finish with this one. Please!!!Elena Horowitz-Brookeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05603633911595032921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9757991.post-41859685214047916722008-03-05T17:38:00.000-04:002008-03-05T17:38:00.000-04:00Boulies - I am pleased you ahould mention "knittin...Boulies - I am pleased you ahould mention "knitting together." THat has been the hardest part of all - making sure the timeline stays accurate has been tricky bearing in mind I chose to relate the story partly in the present and partly in flashbacks. Even in the present Francis has not had total recall until recently so that confused the issue still further.<BR/><BR/>I hope you will see the big picture when we reach the final instalment. I wrote the story last year but shelved it. Even while re-reading last month, before posting, I spotted a glaring plot-hole. I had to ever so slightly re-write the final three parts to avoid cries of admonishment from my readers!Perfect Virgohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17842802482293784692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9757991.post-4572203865432473642008-03-05T13:49:00.000-04:002008-03-05T13:49:00.000-04:00This is all coming together beautifully, PV. I lov...This is all coming together beautifully, PV. I love the fluidity of your descriptions of people, places and events, and how it's all knitting together. So clever the idea of Sue having been following him all along. I never would have suspected anything like this. And also that she was his main visitor. <BR/>Can't wait for Part 13. You write a great suspense/mystery/thriller!Elena Horowitz-Brookeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05603633911595032921noreply@blogger.com